Advertisement Project
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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:
1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.
2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.
3. suggestions for improvement.
4. a positive comment about the commercial.
This Photostory was very informative. It was interesting that the school is .7% Asian dance crew. I would suggest lowering the music at some points. I do not want to go here because it does not have my major.
ReplyDeleteThis photostory advertised the school well and was very energetic. The meow before the information about financial aid was very interesting. It was also interesting to learn that the area is known for its beautiful landscape. I would suggest lowering the music at some points. I do not wish to go here because I would never be able to get accepted.
ReplyDeleteThis photo story is very informative. I found it interesting that many people play big chess. It sounds like it would be a lot of fun. I would recommend lowering the music when you talk about SAT scores. I am not interested in this school because it is too large and I would like to attend a liberal arts college.
ReplyDeleteThis photo story contains a lot of great information about Cornell, and it was really funny! I liked it a lot, and i found it interesting that there is a .4% Native American population, and that students play "super big chess". The only suggestion I have is to lower the music at few parts, but overall this video was very entertaining. Cornell interests me because of its gorgeous scenery but it's a little too competitive for me.
ReplyDeleteThis photo story provded alot of information on Cornell. It was interesting that Cornell has super big chess and an Asian dance crew. It was funny at some parts too! At some parts of the video, the music volume should be lowered. Cornell interests me because of the campus life.
ReplyDeleteThe phtotstory actually sounded like a commercial to me. I think it is interesting that Cornell is well know for agricultural and engineering programs, and that their "basket ball is really good and so is their hockey, and wrestling." haha. The music could have been lower is was difficult to hear certain parts. I am not interested in going to this school because it is too far away from home.
ReplyDeleteThis photo story was advertised very well. I found it interesting that students at Cornell play super big chess. I would recommend lowering the music at certain points. I am not interested in this school because it doesn't offer my major.
ReplyDeleteThis video provided a sufficient amount of inofrmation about the university. A factoid that I found intriguing was that campus stretches an expansive 745 acres. One suggestion for improvement is to lower the volume of the music just a tad becasue it sometimes drowns out the person who's speaking. It does sound like quite an impressive university, but it's just not for me.
ReplyDeleteThis photostory was very informative. I found it interesting that only 56% of students live on campus. I would consider lowering the music in the beginning. I am not interested in this school, it just doesn't seem like a good fit for me.
ReplyDeleteThis photo story had a lot of detail. I found it interesting that Cornell doesn't offer that man scholarships. I would suggest lowering th music at some points.I am interested in this school beacuse I like its size.
ReplyDeleteThe photostory was very informative. I found it interesting that they have super big chess and an Asian dance crew. I would suggest lowering the music at some parts. I am not interseted in Cornell since it is too competitive for me
ReplyDeleteThis photostory was well detailed. I found it interesting and liked that the students at the school acknowledged hip hop dancing. I would recommend that the music was lowered at various points. I'm not very interested because of the competitive nature of the students.
ReplyDeleteThis photostory was very informative and had alot of interesting facts. i found it interesting that 56% of students dorm on campus and that there are not many scholarships available.
ReplyDeleteThe photo-story was very detailed, allowing me to learn much about Cornell University. The almost even 49:51 women to men student ratio on campus is very interesting. The music is overwhelming sometimes throughout the presentation. This college is not on my list because of its size.
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