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Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Geneseo (Mollie & Alisa) 2nd Period

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16 comments:

  1. This project provides a lot of information about Geneseo, especially the sports and activities. I was surprised at how many of the students were at the top of their classes in high school. I would suggest speaking a little more loudly. I am not interested in this school because it does not have my major.

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  2. This photo story provides much information about Geneseo. I found it interesting that the student faculty ratio is 19 to 1. I would suggest talking a little louder at some parts. I am not interested in this school because it does not offer my major.

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  3. This photo story has a great amount of information about Geneseo. I learned that Geneseo offers over 45 majors and over 20 minors. My only suggestion would be to speak a little louder. This school doesn't offer my major, so I am not interested in this school.

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  4. This photo story contains so much great information about Cornell and advertises the school well. I found it interesting that Cornell offers fencing and that 16% of the student population consists of multicultural students. The only recommendation i have is to talk a little louder at some parts of the project. I am interested in Geneseo because i like many of the majors it offers, but it is a very competitive school.

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  5. ..and by Cornell I meant Geneseo.

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  6. This photo story contains alot of info on Geneseo. I found it interesting that 55% of students that go there had an a high school gpa higher than 3.75. i recommend talking a little louder at some parts of the project. I am interested in Geneseo because i like many of the majors it offers.

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  7. This video had tons of info on Geneseo. I found it interesting that they offer community service opportunities there. I though some slides were difficult to hear over the music but it was still very good. I deffinitly want to visit Geneseo because it looks like a school that I may be interested in.

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  8. The photostory explained a lot about the school. The student to faculty ratio is 19:1.They should Speak more loudly. No, because it is too far away from home and in a rural setting.

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  9. This video provided a sufficient amount of inofrmation about the university. A factoid that I found intriguing was that Geneseo was established all the way back to the year 1871. One suggestion for improvement is to lower the music because the speaker gets drowned out at varying instances. It sounds like an attractive college because it contains the majors I want to pursue and seems to have a very home-like feel to it.

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  10. This photostory provided alot of important information about the university. I found it interesting that it offered many majors and that the ratio is 19:1. One suggestion would be to speak louder because some parts were hard to understand and unclear. I am not interested in this college because it seems very competitive.

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  11. This photostory had a lot of information. It was interesting to hear about the extracurricular activities and clubs. Speaking louder would have made the video easier to understand. I am interested in this college because it have a wide variety of major including the one i am specifically interested in.

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  12. The photostory provided a great amount about Geneseo. I found it quite interesting that the student to faculty ratio is 19:1.I would suggest lowering the music a little bit, since it drowned out the speakers a in some areas. I am interested in Geneseo, because it has my major

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  13. This photostory provided a lot of information about Geneseo. I found it interesting that 55% of students had a grade point average over a 3.75. I would've considered speaking a little louder. I don't think I could ever survive at Geneseo let alone get accepted. :)

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  14. I think this photostory advertised geneseo very well. The number of extracurricular activities offered is interestingly high. I would suggest pronouncing your "P"s in a way that doesn't make the microphone angry. I am not interested in geneseo because the teacher to student ratio is too high.

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  15. This presentation provided for a great deal of information about Geneso. not having previously researched this college in detail, this presentation allowed me to learn some basic facts about the college. For example, the fact that Geneso's roots go back to the 1800s is quite interesting. The addition of music would be greatly appreciated. I am actually going to research tihs college further, as it has a couple of majors I am interested in.

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  16. This photostory had alot of detail and some great insight into this college. I knew geneseo was a good school but i didnt know that most students were in the top 10% of their class. This presentation would be better if it were clearer.

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