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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Binghamton (Nick & Rachel) Period 2

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15 comments:

  1. This project advertised Binghamton very well. It was interesting to hear that freshmen are required to live on campus. I would suggest adding some music to the background. I do not want to go here because it does not have my major.

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  2. This photo story told a great amount about Binghamton. It was interesting to learn that 61% of students live on campus. I would suggest adding some music to this photo story to make it more interesting. I do not wish to go here because it is very competitive and I visited the campus and did not like it very much.

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  3. I learned a lot about Binghamton from this project. It was interesting to know that there are approximately 12,000 undergraduates that attend Binghamton. I thought that there were more undergraduates at Binghamton. I would suggest adding background music to the photo story. I am not interested in this school because I already visited there and did not like it because it was not the type of college campus that I wanted.

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  4. There was alot of information in this photo story on Binghamton. It was interesting that the SAT score wasn't required to be much higher than an 1200. I would suggest adding background music to the photo story. I am not interested in this school because it doesn't major in the career that i wish to pursue.

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  5. I thought this video was very informative. I found it interesting that all of their sports are DI but they also have club sports. The only suggestion I have would be to add music. I don't want to go to Binghamton though because I didn't find it appealing when i visited.

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  6. They made the campus seem very inviting in their photostory. I found it interesting that freshmen must live on campus. They should have added background music. No, I do not want to go to Binghampton because it is expensive and too far away from home.

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  7. This photo story was advertised very well. I found it intersting that all sports at Binghamton are Division I. I would recommend adding music in the background. I am interested in this school because it offers my major.

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  8. This video provided a sufficient amount of inofrmation about the university. A factoid that I found intriguing was that the only non-scholarship sport ws cheerleading. One suggestion for improvement is to adjust the volume because the audio varies from time to time. This university is right up my alley and I would attend.

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  9. This photostory gave alot of information about the college. I found it interesting that freshman are required to live on campus. I would add music to the background. I am not interested in this college because it is too far away from home.

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  10. This photostory gave a good amount of detail about the college. The most interesting part was the info about financial aid.Adding background music would make it more entertainingI am not interested in this college because it is too far away from home.

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  11. This photostory provided a lot of information about this college. I found it interesting that Binghamton has all division one teams. I would try to fix the pause in the middle. I am not interested in this college because it's too far from my family.

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  12. This photostory was very informative and advertised the university well. Its interesting that Binghamton seems to be very affordable. I would suggest adding music to allow for easier absorption of information. I am not interested in Binghamton because I'm a wildcat, not a bearcat.

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  13. Nick and Rachel did an awesome job hitting all the highlights of the school. I was interested to learn that Binghamton is a division one school. One suggestion would be to add music and some more information about campus life. I would consider it as a possiblility because of its affordability and location.

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  14. I felt this photostory contained alot of helpful information. I was interested to hear that most of the sports teams are division 1. Maybe adding some more information about campus life would help make the photostory even better.

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  15. It's advertiing for the school is moderately done. I found the facts that Binghampton is a division 1 university and that it has over 160 acres interesting. Improve the presentation by adding music. I am slightly interested in the university.

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