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Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Hofstra University (Rob & Christian) 3rd Period

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22 comments:

  1. I think that this Photo Story did a very good job advertising this school. I found it interesting that scholarships and financial aid is so popular at Hofstra. I think that this Photo Story was very interesting and covered almost all information regarding the school, so no improvements are necessary. I might be interested in this university because it is very close to home and has a very well rounded academic program.

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  2. I think this is a very good photo story. I found it interesting that there is such a variety of majors to choose from at Hofstra. I feel that you did a great job relaying the information and no changes are necessary. I am interested in applying to Hofstra because it is affordable and is not a far distance from home.

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  3. I thought this was a great advertisement for Hofstra. The scholarships that are offered in many sports was something I found very interesting. The several other academic courses provided was another thing I also found very interesting. I wouldn't change anything about this Photo Story. I'm not interested in Hofstra becuase they don't offer the majors I'm interested in.

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  4. Rob and Christian did a great job. The descriptions about the financial aid and admissions requirements were very detailed. I did not know that there were so many scholarship opportunities. I am not looking to join, but I also did not know about Hofstra's extensive ROTC program. It would have been nice to see a few photos of the campus, but I know from my own experience that finding the scenic photos on the website was not easy. I am interested in Hofstra because it has a wide range of academics and a strong spirit.

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  5. This photostory did a great job of advertising Hofstra. I found the music in the begining to be very exciting. I found it interesting that Hofstra offers many sports scholarships. I would not suggest any changes to this photostory. I may be interested in this school because of its close location to home

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  6. This photostory explained Hofstra University very well. The variety of available majors was interesting to me. I have no suggestions for this photostory because I think all of the important information was included. I'm not interested in Hofstra because it is located close to home.

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  7. This photostory covered Hofstra University very well. The information on scholarships and financial aid interested me. I think this photostory throughly covered all the information and have no suggestions for it. I am interested in this school because of its location close to home.

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  8. The photostory did a great job advertising the school especially with the intro music. The financial aid of 16000 was excellent. I do not have nay suggestions as this was great. I would be interested in this school for the great basketball team.

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  9. I think this was a good photo story. The financial aid and scholarship information was interesting. I wouldn't improve anything on this photo story. Im not really interested in this school because it's so close to home.

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  10. I found this photo story to be a good advertisement. I found the bit about the football interesting because I love going to the games. I felt it was very informative, but it seemed to end abruptly. I am somewhat interested in this school because of its location.

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  11. This school is advertised very well. Its interesting how expensive it is. I have no suggestions for improvemet because its very informative. I am not interested becasue its very expensive

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  12. This Photo Story did a great job of advertising Hofstra. I found the availibility of scholarship opportunities to be very interesting. My only suggestion for improvement would be to find more photos of the university. I am not interested in Hofstra because of its location.

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  13. hofstra was advertised very well in this photostory. i found it interesting that scholarships are popular. i would have to say this was very detailed so no improvement needed. if i was staying home this would definitely be a possibility for me.

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  14. This presentation of Hofstra was great. There are many attractive majors in this college and it is great that their are sport and academic scholarships. I don't have any suggestions for their project because it covered all the mandatory information and answered all my questions as well. I am not interested in this college because it too close to home though.

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  15. I believe the photostory did a good job in informing about Hofstra. I liked the amount of detail on financial aid and scholarships. I felt like it lacked pictures of campus life. I'm not interested because of it's proximity to home.

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  16. I think this photostory did a great job in advertising Hofstra. I found the number of scholarships offered to be interesting. i don't have any suggestions for this presentation. I'm not all that interested in this college as i want to go away.

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  17. I found this photostory of Hofstra to be very informative in all fields. I was very interested in the various programs that was mentioned within this presentation. I don't think that any changes have to made on this video. Although there are some interesting programs at Hofstra, I would prefer a university not close to home.

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  18. Hofstra is a great school, and well advertised in this photostory. The music was cute, but a little exhausting. I would love to attend Hofstra, but it seems a little expensive, it I choose to live at home.

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  19. Hofstra sounds like a great school for sports scholorships and the video dose a great job of advertising the school. it sounds great if you would like to stay home which i do not want to do.

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  20. I feel the photostory is very thorough. I thought it was interesting to hear how many scholarships and aid are given to students by the school. I suggest more information about campus life and what students normally do outside of the classroom. I am considering Hoftra because it is a smart financial move, however I am not looking to stay home for school.

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  21. This is a very well done photostory, Hofstra is advertised very well in it. It seems like a great school for sports but the photostory itself could have had a little more detail in it -Moneta

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  22. This was one of the more interesting Photostorys. I was interested in the fact that many sports scholorships for things such as Cross Country and Wrestling are offered, I also enjoyed the intro. Although the intro was funny, it was pretty long, like 30 seconds long, that might need to be cut down a bit. It was a good photostory, but I'm not very intrested in the school.

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