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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Boston University (Jen & Nick) 3rd Period

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23 comments:

  1. I think you did a good job advertising the school. I found it interesting that Boston University is the 20th ranked university in the country. It was hard to hear the information presented with the music. I think it would enhance your presentation if you could hear the facts more clearly. I am interested in this college because it is a well ranked school with many opportunities that I may be interested in.

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  2. I thought this was a very informative ad for BU. The many scholarships offered by the school was something I found very interesting. It was a little hard to hear some of the information because of the music but otherwise everything else was fine. I'm very interested in this university because of its many programs and courses offered. It would be a great opportunity to attend BU.

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  3. Overall the photostory is a good advertisement for BU. The descriptions of student population and the housing options were very informative. Unfortunately, I had a difficult time hearing the narration once the photostory reached the academics section. I think I would have found a lot more about BU that I liked if I had heard these facts, because the pictures looked very appealing. I am interested in BU because it has a great reputation and is located in Boston, an amazing place.

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  4. This photostory did a great job of advertising BU. I found it very interesting that BU is the 20th ranked university in the country. The only suggestion that I could make would be to lower the music as it made narrations very difficult to hear, especially in the "Academics Section" and after. I am intersted in BU because of its Boston location and its great reputation.

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  5. There was a lot of information in this photostory. I thought it was interesting that the dorms can hold up to 1,800 students. I suggest lowering or removing the music because much of the information was inaudible. I am interested in Boston University because it is highly ranked and has a great location.

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  6. This was a great photostory advertising BU. I was interested in the financial aid programs they offer to students. I would recommend lowering the volumne of the music because narrations were very difficult to hear. I am interested in Boston University because of its location and reputation.

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  7. This was a very informative photostory. I found the room & board information very intriguing. I would suggest that you lower the decibel count of the music. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  8. From what I heard this photostory was very informative. I thought it was interesting that Boston University was ranked the 20th school in the country. My only suggestions was to lower the music in the background. I am interested in BU because it is said to be a great university.

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  9. Overall, I thought the photostory was good. I found the location very interesting and the great campus. It was quite difficult to hear with the music. I am interested in this school because of its high ranking.

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  10. I thought this photo story was good but maybe the music could've been a little lower. I was interested in the amount of programs were offered. I would only say to lower the music otherwise everything else was good. Im not interested in going to this school.

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  11. I couldn't really hear the narration , but it seemed to be very informative. It would be a great advertisement if the music was lower. The cute Asian baby was funny. I am somewhat interested in attending this school because of its location.

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  12. It wasnt advertised well because I couldnt hear it. I dont know if there was anything interesting I only heard music. I suggest to take out the music.I dont want to go there because its too far.

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  13. I thought this Photo Story did an adequate job of advertising the school. I found it very interesting that BU was ranked as the 20th best university in the country. Unfortunately, the music overpowered most of the presentation. With the music lowered, the Photo Story would be a very useful tool in checking out BU. I am somewhat interested in BU because of its amazing reputation.

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  14. despite not hearing much, the university sounds very nice and very respected. i also found it interesting that it was the 20th ranked university in the country. the only suggesting would be to take out or lower the music. i am not interested because of location.

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  15. I thought this Photostory did a a pretty well job in advertising BU. Its great that this school is 20th best in the country. I however, am not interested in this college because i am looking into SUNY schools. I only suggest lowering the backround music because it was very hard to hear the facts at times.

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  16. I enjoyed this presentation on BU. I was surprised that BU was ranked the 20th best in the nation. The music was too loud throughout the presentation. I like the location of the college, but I'm afraid the academic focus isn't in the field I was hoping to study in.

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  17. This photostory did a great job advertising BU. BU being ranked 20th in the nation was interesting. I would recommend adjusting the music volume. I am interested in this school due to its high academic ranking.

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  18. I think you did a fantastic job on advertising BU. I thought the music helped to enhance the presentation of BU very much. Although I would suggest that you readjust the music so that your marration may be heard but overall, good job! Since this university has a very high academic ranking, I would be very interesting in attending it.

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  19. I could not quite hear all of this presentation. Although BU is a great school, I am not interested in leaving NY to got to school.

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  20. This was a great advertisment for BU and i didnt know it was the 2oth best school in the country which is very intresing. i would have liked it if the music was a little lower because i am very intrested in BU and overall this was a great project.

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  21. The photostory was pretty good and I have never heard of Boston University before this photostory. I think it is cool the school is ranked 20th in the country. I would not go to this school because it is too cold in Boston.

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  22. Well done. Well done. this photostory showed how great Boston University really is. I did not know that it was so prestigious (ranked 20th in the country) and I would like to go there if it wasnt in Boston - Moneta

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  23. This photostory was well done. I enjoyed learning about the college and how good it is (ranked 20th in the country). The music chosen wasnt too good for what was trying to be done though, it was also too loud. Im not very intrested in anything Boston, Im a Yankee's Fan :]

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