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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Penn State (Morgan & Carolyn) 3rd Period

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22 comments:

  1. I think that this Photo Story did a very good job advertising this school. It highlighted the campus life very well. I found the out-of-state tuition interesting because I thought that the Penn State tuition was a lot more. I would suggest keeping all of the information about campus life and activities together. It seems like it would be a nice college to attend based on campus life, but I'd have to do more research on their academic programs to see if I'd want to attend.

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  2. This was a very good advertisement of Penn State. The different programs at Penn State was something I found interesting. I would talk more specifically about the many programs offered at the school. This university could be a possible option for me because of its fair costs and the many majors it offers.

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  3. This a very good photostory about the college. The great athletrics and various programs were interesting. More focus on the social life would have been better since it is so good. I would attend this university for the great sports.

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  4. The Penn State photostory looks great. It portrays Penn State very positively. I was surprised to learn that a large percentage of students at the university are not from Pennsylvania. My only recommendation would be to discuss the academic opportunities and honors program in greater depth. Penn State seems like a great school, but with over 40,000 undergraduates I think I may be a little too large for me.

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  5. This photostory did a great job of advertising Penn State. I found the elaboration on campus life to be very interesting. It was very informative but I would suggest speaking louder at certain points so it would be easier to understand the narration. The campus life there seems very exciting, but it may be too large of a school for me to attend

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  6. Penn State was advertised very well in this photostory. I found all of the special study programs to be interesting. I have no recommendations for this photostory because it was very informative and thorough. I'm interested in this school because of the location and the fact that it is such a large school.

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  7. This was a very good advertisement for Penn State. The information about tuition was very interesting. I have no suggestions, as this photostory met all the requirements. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  8. This was a great photostory. I found it interesting that there were so many different types of housing at Penn State. I have no suggestions for this photostory because it was very informative and I feel a learned everything I wanted to know about Penn State. I am interested in Penn State because of all the activies and academics options.

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  9. I think this was a great photo story. They did a good job talking about campus life. I wouldn't suggest they change anything, i thought it was good. This seems like a good school but im not interested in going here

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  10. I found this photostory to be a good advertisement. The study abroad program was very interesting. I would suggest anything because it was very informative. I might be interested in the school, due to its location.

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  11. This was very informative. It was interesting the percent of student that are men and women. I have no suggestions it was very informative. I do not want to go there because it is too far.

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  12. This presentation did a great job of advertising Penn State. I found the extensive information on student life on campus to be very interesting. One suggestion I have is to elaborate on some of the programs briefly mentioned like the Honors program and study abroad opportunities. I am somewhat interested in Penn State because of its location and academic reputation.

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  13. this photostory did a very good job advertising the school. i found the housing options and sports very interesting. i would not make any suggestions. im not interested because of location.

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  14. This photostory was great and very informative. It's great how many programs are offered for the students such as clubs and the amount of sports is definatley adds to the school as well. The narration was low at times, but that is it. I am interested in looking at this school after watching this presentation.

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  15. I enjoyed this presentation on Penn State. What I found most interesting was the information on the campus life. I would recommend speaking a little louder into the microphone at some times. I am not as interested in Penn State for it's location.

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  16. This was a great photostory on Penn State. Penn State's campus life seemed interesting.I would suggest fixing the narration. I am interested in this school for its academic majors.

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  17. I really thought that this photostory did a great job in advertising Penn State. Everything about this university was very interesting including the very soothing music. There's nothing I would recommend to change this photostory. I am very interested in this school because of its academic majors and sports.

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  18. The photostory advertises Penn State very well and i am intrested in the school because not only dose it look nice it has some great programs. i would have liked to hear a bit more about the specific academics. it was a nice project.

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  19. This advertisement for Penn State was good. I like the sports teams for Penn state. I don't think there is anything wrong with this photostory. I am not interested in this school because it is too far away from my house.

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  20. I really enjoyed this photostory and thought that it advertised the school of Penn State incredibly well. The description of campus life was very interesting and detailed. -Moneta

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  21. I think Carolyn and Morgan did a great job advertising for Penn State. I found the price of tuition to be very interesting due to the fact that I always assumed Penn State was much more expensive than it actually is. I recommend adressing the necesary tests for admissions earlier within the photostory. I am considering Penn State as a school because it seems like a school I would enjoy attending.

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  22. This photostory is very nicely done. I found all the things one can do make campus life pretty inviting. Although, some activities and campus life facts are scattered through the photostory, they should be kept together. I might go to Penn State becuase my best friend and I have been planning it for a while if I dont go to a military academy.

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