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Thursday, May 27, 2010

Cortland (Danie & Emma) 3rd Period

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22 comments:

  1. I think that this Photo Story did a fantastic job of advertising this school. I found it interesting that Cortland offers so many different types of housing. I really don't have any suggestions for improvement of this presentation. I am not interested in attending this school because it doesn't really fit my needs.

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  2. This Photo Story was great! I was really impressed by how detailed all of the information was. It was interesting to hear about the many scholarships and internship programs that are offered, as well as specific campus activities that occur. Because every section was so thorough, I don't have suggestions for improvement. I like some of the programs that Cortland has to offer but I do not know if Cortland is the right school for me because of its location.

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  3. This was a wonderful Photo Story. It was very thorough and clear. It was interesting to see how important athletics are to this college. I dont have any improvements to suggest for this presentation because you did such a great job explaining it. I am not sure if I'm very interested in this college because it seems like it specializes in areas other than the one's I am looking into.

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  4. This was a very good photostory. It was interesting hearing about the success of SUNY Cortalnd's athletics program. I don't think anything needed to be changed; all of the topics explained were very informative. I'm not really interested in the school because it doesn't have the majors I would like to study.

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  5. This photostory did a great job of advertising SUNY Cortland. I found it very interesting that it was mentioned that they won the baseball championships in 2009. I would not be able to think of any necessary changes because everything was explained very well. I am not really interested in this school because they do not have the majors that I plan to go into.

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  6. This photostory advertised Cortland very well. All of the information is detailed and full of examples. I found all of the available options in both sports and academics to be interesting. The only suggestion I have is to include the average SAT scores students need to be admitted to this college. I'm not interested in SUNY Cortland because of it's location upstate.

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  7. This was a great photostory advertising SUNY Cortland. The information on athletics in this school was verty interesting. I can't really think of anything to suggest for this photostory. I'm not interested in this school because I don't think it will meet my needs.

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  8. This photostory was very good. I found the information regarding student activities to be interesting. I do not have any suggestions. I am not sure if I am interested in this university because I have yet to look into colleges.

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  9. This photostory did a great job portraying Cortland. I found the immense amount of clubs and academic options very interesting. My only suggestion is that the SAT scores needed to attend this school should have been shared. I am not interested in this school because it is not as famous for the major I want as compared to other colleges.

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  10. This was a very good photostory. I found the great athletic programs interesting. I have no suggestions. I am not interested in this school because it does not have a good engineering program.

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  11. I think this photo story did a very good job. I found it interesting how into athletics this school is. I don't think anything needed to be added to this photo story. They did a good job talking about everything in detail. Im not interested in going to this school because they don't have the major im looking for.

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  12. I found this photo story to be very informative and a good advertisement.I found the student internships interesting. I wouldn't make any suggestions because I feel nothing needs to be added. I don't feel I'll be applying here though because of its location.

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  13. This story did a great job advertising the school. It was interestnig that its a division 3 school. I wouldnt make any suggestion if was good the way it was. I'm not interested in this school although i have been there and it is in a beautiful area i just dont feel its right for me.

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  14. I thought this Photo Story did a great job advertising Cortland. I found the wide array of athletics offered to be very interesting. The only suggestion for improvement I have is to included more information about admissions requirements (SAT and SAT II Scores). I am not interested in this school because it does not offer my intended major.

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  15. This photostory did a great job displaying Cortland and what it has to offer. The great amount of athletics and clubs offered to students is great. The only thing i suggest is that you give more information on the majors the college has. This college may be a possibility for me because I want to stay in new york but not stay too close too home.

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  16. I believe this photostory did a great job advertising the school. The number of scholarships given out was quite interesting. I don't recommend any suggestions as the photostory detailed the college well. Cortland is a great college but i don't think it covers what I'm looking for.

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  17. I think this photostory did an excellent job in advertising Cortland. Bravo! The number of variety of sports was quite interesting. What the majors are could be explained more thoroughly but other then that, there's no need for improvement. As for attending Cortland, I don't think it has the programs i'm looking for.

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  18. Danielle Jurman
    The photospory was done realy well and i think that it was intresing how much money they gavein scholarship and finatial aid. I dont think this school is for me.

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  19. They did a good with this photostory. The thing that stuck out the most was the amount of money they are giving away for scholarships. I do not want to attend this school

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  20. The photostory was wonderful. I found the cure program in which students teach inner city children very interesting. I suggest giving a more detailed description of the majors offered. I am not interested in Courtland because I visited there and didn't like it.

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  21. This is a great photostory. If I was an undecided student looking at Cortland and than saw this photostory, it woul strengthen my opinion of the school. I was especially intrigued by the cure program at Cortland.
    -Moneta

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  22. This Photostory is pretty good. I was intrested in all the majors offered as well as the athletics department of Cortland. I suggest maybe going into detail about the majors though, it was stated that there are many, but not of what type. Another suggestion is that there is a "go" during some slides that distracts the viewer. I'm not very intrested in this school since I want to go to some sort of military academy.

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