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1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

University of Illinois (Sid & Nick) 3rd Period

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23 comments:

  1. I think this Photo Story advertised the school very well. I found it's location interesting and found the areas that it is well known for very interesting. I think it would help to elaborate on the activities available outside of the academic life at Illinois. I am not interested in going to this school because of the far distance I would have to travel to get there.

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  2. I think that this Photo Story was a very good advertisement for the university. It pointed out the strong academic areas very well. I found it interesting that the athletics department is so successful at Illinois. I think it would have helped to include more admission requirements. I am not interested in attending this schools because it is too far away from New York.

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  3. This Photo Story was a great advertisement for the University of Illinois. Their athletics program and even high rankings for their multiple academic programs were some of the things I found very interesting. I felt that nothing needed to be changed in this Photo Story. I'm not really interested in attending the university because its too far; even though it does offer some great majors.

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  4. Sid and Nick did a very nice job with this Photo Story. I learned a lot of information about the university that I did not already know. I found it very interesting how some of their colleges are nationally ranked by prestigious organizations. I wish that there had been a little more information about housing and student activities, but it was an otherwise great Photo Story. I don't think I am interested in Illinois because I would prefer to go to schools in the Northeast.

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  5. This photostory did a great job of advertising University of Illinois. I found it very interesting how highly ranked the track and golf, as well as the other sports teams. I would suggest elaborating on the admission requirements. I may be interested in this school because of its great business programs, but would be hesitant about atending there because of its far distance from NY.

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  6. This photostory did very well with advertising the University of Illinois. I thought the school's high rankings were pretty interesting. In my opinion, all of the necessary information was already in the photostory, so I have no suggestions. I'm not interested in this school because it is too far from home.

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  7. This photostory advertised the University of Illinois very well. I was interested to hear that this school is highly ranked in business programs. I would suggest adding more about its admission requirements. adding more about I am not interested in this school because of its long distance from home.

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  9. This photostory was mind-blowingly brilliant. All of the information captivated my soul, and made me look at life in completely different ways. All pieces of information, from tuition, to population, to scholarships, were quite interesting. Sid's voice was wonderfully articulate. My only suggestion would be that Sid and Nicholas make this photostory less incredible, because it makes all other presentations look horrible in comparison. Because of this advertisement, I am now interested in the University of Illinois.

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  10. The photostory did a great job at advertising the Univeristy of Illinois. I found it interesting that the track team and the golf team are the most well known sports teams. Adding more about admissions requirements would make this photostory better. I am not interested in this college because it is farther away then I planned on going for college.

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  11. This was a good photostory. I was interested in the high ranking of this school. The only thing i would suggest would be adding more about admissions. Im not interested in this college because its a little too far.

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  12. I believe this was a pretty good advertisement for the school.I found the community art center to be interesting.Unfortunately, some of the narration was muffled and hard to understand, but otherwise it was very informative. I don't think I'm interested in this school because of its location.

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  13. it is very informative. I found it interesting about how expensive it is. I suggest to re record because its hard to hear. I do no want to go there because it is too far.

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  14. I thought this presentation did a great job of advertising the University of Illinois. I found the information on to be very interesting. My only suggestion for improvement would be additional information on student life on campus. I am not interested in this school because of its location.

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  15. i thought the university was very well advertised. the academics were very interesting, and that the college was mostly state residents. my only suggestion would be fixing the sound. im not interested in the college because of location.

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  16. This presentation was very informative and helpful. However it was hard to hear the narration at times because of the microphone. More information about student life would have been useful. I'm not interested in going to this college.

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  17. I thoroughly enjoyed this presentation on University of Illinois. I particularly liked the information about the track team being one of the more well known sports. I would have appreciated more information about student life. However, I'm not so interested in this college because of it's distance from the northeastern area.

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  18. I thought this photostory did a great job advertising Illinois. It was interesting how well the school was ranked. I would suggest fixing the sound. I am not interested in this college because of its location.

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  19. I thought this presentation was very well advertised. I was very interested in their engineering program and how their business program was ranked number 3. There really is nothing that I would change in this photostory. Although this university was very interesting to me, I dislike its location because i despise the coldness.

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  20. This was a realy thourough project for the academics. i would have liked to hear about the student life a bit more. it sounds like a nice school but it is a bit to rural for what i am looking for.

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  21. Wow. this was amazing the beautiful voices of sid and nick just pulled me in and wouldnt let me go. The university of Illinois looks like a wonderful school, especially after hearing about the weather in Illinois and its location. - Moneta

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  22. This phtostory was a great advertisment for the school. I found it interesting that not many scholarships were offered due to the overwhelming amount of state residents that attend the university. I suggest including more information on the admissions process. I am not very interested in Illinois due to its distance from New York.

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  23. This photostory was okay. I enjoyed learning about the academic strengths of the university, but was a bit discouraged by the prices. The photostory was done pretty well and doesnt need too many changes. I dont think I'd go to Illinois of all places to go to college though.

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