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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Stony Brook University (Tara & Victoria) 2nd Period

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15 comments:

  1. The photo story advertised the school very well and I learned more about the school. I found it interesting that about half of freshman do live on campus. If anything could be improved, I would say that there could be more pictures of the school. I am not interested in this school because it is too close to home.

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  2. This PhotoStory was extremely informative. It was interesting to hear that most majors focused on biological and biomedical sciences. I don't know what could have been improved; this project was very well done. I am not interested in this school because it does not have my major.

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  3. This photo story was advertised very well. I found it interesting that 51% of students live on campus. I would recommend adding more pictures of the school. I am not interested in this school because it doesnt offer my major.

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  4. This photo story provided a lot of important information about Stony Brook and advertised the school very well. I found it interesting that the majors in Stony Brook focus mainly on biologial and biomedical sciences. I would recommend speaking a little bit slower in the project. I am not interested in this school because I do not want to attend a school that is on Long Island, and the campus is a little too large.

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  5. This video advertised the school very well. I found it interesting that the students are so diverse. I think there should be more pictures of the actual university. I don't want to attend this school because it's too close to home.

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  6. I think they did a good job advertising the college. I find it interesting that a 3.6 GPA is needed to get into Stony Brook. I think they should have spoken more clearly at some points.I am interested in this school because it is not very far from home, offers my major, and many of my friends already go there.

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  7. This video provided a sufficient amount of inofrmation about the university. An interesting fact ws that there are 52% men and 48% women attending the college. One suggestion for improvement is to speak a tad bit louder just to get a clear presentation overall. I would attend Stony Brook because it is financially, majors I wish to pursue, and excellent electives.

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  8. This photostory provided alot of useful information about the university. I found it interesting that 51% live on campus and that the majors focus mainly on biologial and biomedical sciences. I would suggest adding more pictures of the school. I am interested in Stonybrook because it is close to home and it not as expensive as most schools.

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  9. tgis video has a lot of information. I would suggest having more pictures of the campus. The financial aid was interesting. I am interrested in this college because my cousin went the re for the same major thta i would like to have and she loved it.

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  10. This photostory provided a lot of information about Stony Brook. I liked that freshman housing was guaranteed. I would consider editing the pausing in the middle. I'm not interested in this school because they do offer the major i'm interested in.

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  11. This video was advertised very well. I found it interesting 51% of students live on campus There could have been more pictures of the campus. I wouldn't attend Stony Brook since it is too close to home

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  12. I learned quite a bit about stony brook from this photostory. It's interesting that the population is 40% female and 52% male. I would suggest having less tara in the presentation. I am not interested in Stony Brook because it is too close to home.

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  13. The photostory was very well done. Although I am not considering Stony Brook because it is a little to close, I was interested in how afforable the University is. The photostory would run more smoothly with fewer pauses.

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  14. The photo story allowed me to glean much about Stony brook. I found it interesting that the majority of students admitted had a ACT composite score of over 18. I suggest additional pictures of the university itself. Wanting to move, as many teens do, as far away from home as possible, this university therefore isn't that high on my list.

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  15. This presentation was very informative, and helped me get a grasp on campus life at stonybrook. I didnt realize they had majors like marine biology. Im not really looking at this college because i feel its too close.

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