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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Binghamton (Nghi & Justin) 3rd Period

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23 comments:

  1. I think you did a very good job on this Photo Story. I found interesting the campus life that you explained and all the activities available. It would have been nice if you elaborated on what majors and areas academically the school is known for. I am very interested in this college because it is affordable and has numerous opportunities I may enjoy.

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  2. I think that this Photo Story did a very nice job of advertising the college. I found it interesting that Binghamton has so many Division I sports. I think it would have been useful to talk a little bit more about the campus life of Binghamton. I may be interested in this college because it is a relatively cheap college and has a good engineering school.

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  3. This was a very good Photostory. The several programs and courses provided is something that definitely interested me. I wouldn't change anything about this ad. Binghamton is another school I'm interested in attending because of the majors they offer.

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  4. This was a great photostory with the many pictures of the campus. T found it interesting that 10 percent of the students are from other countries. Nothing needed to be changed about the photostory. I would like to go here for the credits that would transfer and great business program.

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  5. This Photo Story does a great job at advertising Binghamton. I found it interesting how many programs and activities are offered on campus. Binghamton provides their students with many services and options, making it a great second home. I would not suggest any changes because I think that everything important was addressed. I might be interested in Binghamton because of its many opportunities and activities.

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  6. This photostory is very informative and advertises Binghamton well. I found the variety of acivities and academic programs to be interesting. I wouldn't recommend any changes because a lot of information and many examples are incorperated in this photostory. I like Binghamton because it is a large school and offers majors I am interested in.

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  7. This photostory did a good job advertising Binghamton. I was interested to hear about all the activities available to students. I wouldn't suggest any changes to this photostory. I may be interested in Binghamton because of the programs they offer.

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  8. This was a wonderful presentation. It was very interesting to hear that 10% of the population are from foreign nations. I have no suggestions, everythign was fine. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  9. This photostory did a good job portraying Binghamton. I found it intersting to hear about all the activies offered there. My only suggestion is to talk more about the academics of Binghamton. I am interested in the college because of the academic programs offered.

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  10. This photostory was very good. It was intersting to hear that ten percent of the students are from different countries. I think they did a good job with all the information. I don't think they need to add anything else. I might be interested in this college because of the many programs offered.

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  11. I think this photostory was a good advertisement. The activities offered were interesting. I wouldn't suggest any improvements because this photostory was very informative. I'm not interested in this school because of its location.

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  12. This was a great photostory. It was interesting that the cost of tuition was so low. I have no suggestions it was a good story. I want to go there because it is so close to my home upstate.

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  13. This presentation did a great job of advertising Binghamton. I found the information on tuition and other costs to be very interesting. I do not have any suggestions for improvement- the Photo Story adequately covered all necessary information. I am very interested in Binghamton because of its cost and extensive academic programs.

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  14. this was a very good presentation. i found the academic programs and population diversity interesting. i do not have any suggestions, the photostory covered all topics. i would be interested in this college because of the majors offered and tuition costs.

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  15. Binghamton was presented very well in this photostory. There are so many programs offered for students at this college. Their are so many amazing majors provided at this school. I don't recommend any changes to be made to this project and i am very excited to look more into this college! :)

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  16. Justin & Nghi did a great job advertising Binghamton. I was interested by the demographic information that listed 10% as foreign. I would've liked to hear a little bit more about the campus life. I think I'm a bit interested into looking into Binghamton as well.

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  17. justin and nghi did very well in this photostory portraying Binghamton. Though it has many great majors and programs, a number of succesfull sport teams and is relivly inexpensive it is a bit to rural for me.

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  18. I think they did a good job for this photostory. I thought it was cool that there were a lot of foreign students that go the school. It would have been better if you would have given more info about the majors. I am not interested in going to this school.

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  19. The photostory did a fantastic advertising the university. I found the descriptions to be precise and accurate, and informative. I found that the university offers psychological courses to be very interesting. Speak closer to the microphone. No, I am not interested in the university, primarily because of location.

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  20. Binghamton looks like a great school. The most interesting thing I saw there was the foreign population of the school, it looked really cool - Moneta

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  21. This photostory makes Binghamton very appealing. The most interesting fact I learned was that all of Binghamton's sports teams are division 1. I think Nghi and Justin did a wonderful job with the presentation and don't think anything needs to be altered. I am considering Binghamton as a college because it appears to be a great school for its price.

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  22. Nghi and Justin did a good job on this college. I liked the fact that they included small facts like how far away the school is from Mepham and the population of the school being foreign. Music was missing from the photostory, so it became a little dull, though. There is also a distinct difference in Justin's low voice and Nghi's louder voice, I think Justin may have been a little too far from the mic. I dont really plan on going to Binghamton.

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  23. This photostory did a great job advertising Binghamton. I found that the diverse population was interesting. I don't see any improvement needed for this great presentation. I am somewhat interested in this college due to its engineering program.

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