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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Hofstra University (Alicia & Kelly) 2nd Period

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15 comments:

  1. The photo story answered all of my questions about Hofstra that I didn't know the answers to. I found it interesting that basketball is a popular sport at Hofstra. I would recommend either speaking louder or lowering the music. I am not interested in this school because it is too close to home.

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  2. The photo story told me a lot about Hofstra. I found it interesting that 73% of students live on campus. I would suggest speaking louder. I am not interested in this school because they do not have my major.

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  3. This project was very informative. I was interested to hear that Hofstra has a radio station and a television station. I would suggest speaking more loudly or lowering the music. I am somewhat interested in this school but I don't think I am going here.

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  4. This photo story was advertised very well. I found it interesting that 73% of students live on campus. I would recommend speaking louder. I am not interested in this school because I want to go away for school.

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  5. This photo story advertised Hofstra University very well and provided a lot of information about the school. I found it interesting that the student to faculty ratio is 14:1. I would recomment speaking louder in the project because the music drowned out what was being said. I am not interested in this school because it is too close to home.

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  6. This photo story offered alot of information on Hofstra. I found it interesting that so many students transfer in. Some of the slides are hard to hear though so i recomend speaking louder. I am not interested in Hofstra because it's too close to home.

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  7. This photostory gave me alot of information about Hofstra. I found it interesting that the student to faculty ratio is 14:1. I would recomend either speaking louder or lowering the music because it was hard to understand what was being said. Hofstra seems like a great school but is to close to home.

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  8. This video provided a sufficient amount of inofrmation about the university.I ofund that the average shcolarship package fact to be quite interesting. One suggestion for improvement is to speak louder so the listener can clearly hear all of the information stated. I would not attend Hofstra because it is too closse to home and educationally just isn't for me.

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  9. This photosory was filled with interesting information. The price of books was an interesting piece of information to add. Speaking louder woud have improved the video. I am interested in hoftra because it is close to hame and has a nice campus.

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  10. This photostory answered many of my questions about Hofstra University. I liked that Hofstra has a radio station. I would consider speaking louder to improve the photostory. I am interested in Hofstra University because they have a diverse campus and many different options.

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  11. The photostory was very informative on Hofstra. I found it interesting that 73% of students live on campus. I would suggest speaking louder. I am not interested in Hofstra because it is close to home

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  12. This photostory advertised Hofstra very well. It is interesting that I would suggest lowering the music and speaking louder. It is interesting that Hofstra is known for its basketball team. I am not interested in Hofstra because it is too close to home.

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  13. The photostory for Hofstra was very informative. I am not interested in the school because it is too close, but was interested to learn that it was a private school. I would suggest lowering the music slightly.

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  14. Growing up, I was always bombarded with Hofstra advertisements. However, this presentation allowed me to learn more about the university in a mere two minutes what dozens of ads couldn't. The variety of sports found at Hofstra are interesting. I recommend lowering music volume or speaking louder. Being too close to home, I am not interested in Hofstra University.

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  15. This was a very detailed and helpful presentation. Hofstra has always been a school i have looked at. I did not know it was a private school and that it offered so much financial aid. I feel its too close to home though.

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