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Friday, May 21, 2010

Columbia University (Mike Moneta & Brandon Singh) 3rd Period

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22 comments:

  1. I think this is a very well presented presentation. I found it interesting that the percentage of financial aid met is 100%. I also found interesting the average SAT scores of the students that go to Columbia. I think it would have been nice to elaborate on the sports aspect of this university. I am not interested in this college mainly because of the high costs and high expectations I would have to meet to fit into the school.

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  2. I think that this was a very well organized Photo Story and highlighted a lot of the key aspects of the school. I found it interesting that the average amount of financial aid given is so high. An addition of more information about the athletics of Columbia would have been useful. I am not really interested in this school because of its high standards and admission requirements.

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  3. I thought that this was a very informative Photostory which talked a lot about the important aspects of the university. I thought the high admission standards were very interesting. More information about the campus life could've been added. I'm not interested in this school because of its very high tuition.

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  4. This photostory was very informative with great pictures of the college and shows its great location. I found it interesting the high percentage of students who received above 700 on all three sections of the SATs. I would want to go to this school because of the great academics and location.

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  5. The Columbia Photo Story looks great. I found it interesting that such a nice campus can be located in the middle of New York City. It would have been nice to learn more about the activities at the university and the clubs and groups that Columbia offers. I would be interested in this school because it has a great reputation and a beautiful campus in an amazing city.

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  6. This photostory did a great job of advertising Columbia. I found the very high percentage of financial aid met was very interesting. I would suggest adding more information about Columbia athletics. I would be interested in attending this school because of its great acamdemic reputation as well as its great NYC campus

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  7. This photostory did a thorough job of advertising this school. I found it interesting that Colombia university is one of the most expensive in the nation. I'd suggest talking more about athletics and activities. I'm not interested in Colombia because it is so expensive.

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  8. This was a great photostory. The information pertaining to cost was interesting. More information about campus life would have been nice. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  9. It is interesting to hear what the SAT scores have to be to get into Columbia. Also, it was interesting that everyone who applys for financial aid gets it. It would have been more useful to elaborate on academics offered and campus life. I am not intersted in Columbia because the tution cost is so high.

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  10. I thought this photostory was very informative. I think its really great that everybody who needs financial aid gets it. I think they could've talked more about athletics. Im not interested in this school because it doesn't offer the major im looking for.

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  11. This was a good photostory advertising Columbia University. The high average on financial aid met were very interesting. I would suggest adding more information about athleticcs in this school. I am not interested in this school because of its high tuition cost.

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  12. I thought this photostory was a good advertisement. I found it interesting that freshmen have to live on campus. I wouldn't make any suggestions because it was very informative. I'm not interested in this school because it's too expensive.

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  13. This photo story was very good. It was interesting that it is a top schol and one of the most expensive. I have no suggestions. I dont want to go there because I hate the city.

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  14. the presentation was very good. i thought the academic programs were very interesting. i would have no suggestions because it was very informative. i would not want to go here because it is hard to get into and high tuition costs.

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  15. This presentation did a great job of advertising Columbia. I found the information on financial aid availibility to be very interesting. My only suggestion for improvement would be to add more information on athletics and other student programs. I am not interested in Columbia because of its location.

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  16. They did a good job advertising Columbia University in this photostory. It was very informative and the fact that anyone that needs financial aid is able to get it is great. However due to the cost and difficulty to get in I am not really interested in this college.

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  17. I enjoyed how well they presented Colombia University. I was intrigued by the information about the school's financial aid. I would have liked to heard more about the school's athletic programs. I am not interested in Colombia due to the ethnic composition of the student body.

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  18. I think Mike and Brandon did a fine job on advertising on Columbia University. The amount of information provided was very beneficial and I found this photostory to be quite amusing. Although there could have been more information about the sports section. I might be interested in this university since it consists of a medical program.

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  19. This photostory was done very well and i am defently intrested in columbia because of its location in Manhatten. They did a great job in outling academics and finatial aid and i am defintly intresed in coulumbia.

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  20. This was a good photostory about Columbia. I thought it was crazy how many people attend that got higher then a 700 on all three sections on the SAT. Brandon and Mike probably should have spoke a little more about the sports teams. I wish I could get into this school because I would go.

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  21. Moneta and Brandon did a very nice job on this project. My favorite parts were the sections on admission requirements and programs as a result of the way the boys said the titles. I laughed. I suggest elaborating more on the sports offered and other aspects of campus life. The school sounds like a great college to attend but I dont think I will be considering it as an option due to its high financial cost and SAT requirements.

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  22. This project was alright. I thought that the financial aid given to new-comers being so high was intriguing. Although, I'd like to hear more about the sports offered in Colombia. And I dont think I'll be going there.

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