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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Suny Geneseo (Ariel & Danielle) 3rd Period

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22 comments:

  1. This is a very good presentation. I found interesting the study abroad option for students as well as the athletic aspect of the college. I think it is great that you included the culture part of the university too. I may be interested in applying to this university because of all the great opportunities and new experiences it has to offer.

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  2. I found this Photo Story to be very useful and presented information about Geneseo very well. I found the amount of NCAA Division I sports to be interesting. I think that there should have been more information about the academic programs offered at Geneseo. I am not interested in this university because it does not have too great of an engineering program compared to other schools.

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  4. This Photostory did a good job in advertising SUNY Geneseo. The fact that over 600+ study abroad programs are offered at the school was something I found interesting. There wasn't anything that needed to be changed/added. I would definitely consider going to Geneseo because of its many academic programs including a Pre-Med program, which I happen to have a particular interest in.

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  5. This was an excellent photostory. It is great that you are guaranteed housing for the first four years. The only change would be to include more pictures of the college. I would not want to go to this school because of the location.

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  6. I think that this Photo Story is a great advertisement for Geneseo. I was interested by the variety of student organizations and programs offered. It was impressive how many dining and housing options there are. It would have been nice to see a few more pictures of the campus, but otherwise I wouldn't change anything about this Photo Story. I don't think I am interested in Geneseo because of it's far distance from Long Island.

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  7. This photostory did a great job of advertising Geneseo. I found the four year housing guarantee to be very interesting. I would suggest adding more actual pictures of Geneseo. I would not want to go to this school because it is very far location.

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  8. Geneseo is portrayed well in this photostory. I found it interesting that this is a liberal arts school. However, I would have liked to hear about other available majors and academic opportunities. I'm not interested in Geneseo because of the location.

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  9. This was a very informative presentation. The information about athletics was interesting. I would have liked to see more pictures of the university. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  10. This presentation about Geneso was good. I liked how you elaborated on the cultural aspect of Geneseo as well as the activites offered. I would have liked to hear more about the school academically and something about the majors offered. I am interested in Geneseo because it is one of the top state schools.

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  11. This was a good photo story about Geneseo. The study abroad option for student is great. I think there shouldve been more on the majors offered. Im not sure if I want to attend this college because i dont know if they offer the major im looking for.

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  12. This photostory provided information very well on SUNY Geneseo. The fact that they provide three professional programs were very interesting. I would suggest adding more information about academics in this school. I am interested in this school because of the programs they offer.

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  13. This photostory was a good advertisement. I found the study abroad program interesting. I wouldn't make any suggestions because it was very informative. I'm not interested in this school because of its location.

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  14. This photo story was a good advertisment. I found it interesting how far it was. I wouldnt make any suggestions because it was a good story. I dont want to go there because its way to far.

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  15. this was a very well advertised school. i thought the academic progrmas and study abroad were very interesting. i would make no suggestions. i would not want to go here because of location.

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  16. This presentation did a good job advertising Geneseo. I found the information on student programs to be very interesting. One suggestion for improvement would be to add more information on the academic aspects of the school. I am very interested in Geneseo because of its reputation as one of the best colleges in New York.

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  17. This photostory was very informative and interesting. I found the sports majors to be very useful and the amount of diversity within this university to be quite peculiar. There's not much suggestion I can make about this presentation since it was done very well. However, I might not want to attend this school because of it's location.

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  18. This advertisement did a good job representing SUNY Genesseo. I thought it was cool that students could study abroad during a semester. There wasn't anything wrong with this photostory. I don't want to go to this school because of its location.

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  19. Genesseo seems very nice but it is very far away, i would not be interested into going to a school so far away but it is advertised well - Moneta

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  20. Geneseo was advertised fantastically by the photostory. I found it interesting that the school has an acquestrian course. The only suggestion I can think to offer is for Danielle tospeak slightly slower so it can be easier to undertand all of the facts stated. Geneseo seems like a wonderful school and I will be considering it as I make my college decisions.

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  21. Geneseo was shown pretty well in this Photostory. I found it funny that the intresting parts and flaws were sort of switched with that of the Colombia project. Here, the sports are shown quite clearly, but academics are lacking in depth. I dont think I'll be going to Geneseo.

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  22. This photostory did a great job advertising SUNY Geneseo. I found the information about about the student programs to be interesting. I think the presentation was good and don't have any suggestions. I am not interested in this school due to its location.

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