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Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Cornell University (Alie & Kim) 3rd Period

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23 comments:

  1. This is a really great presentation. I found all of the background information really interesting and think it is very clever that you included it. The music made the presentation as well. I dont have any improvements on this photo story because i think you did a great job. I may be interested in this college because it is very high ranked but it is very hard to get into.

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  2. This photostory looks great, and it portrays Cornell very positively. I am very impressed with the history of Cornell. Including side information like the past performers at the school makes it easy to imagine what student life is actually like. I enjoyed the music, but sometimes I had trouble hearing the narration over the music. Cornell's great reputation makes me interested, but I am unsure if I want to attend a school that is not very close to a more urban atmosphere.

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  3. This presentation advertised the school very well. I think that all of the past information about the school made it very interesting. I would suggest lowering the music so it is easier to hear the narration. I am very interested in this university because it has a top engineering program, but the location turns me off.

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  4. This was a very informative photostory. It was very interesting to learn about the multiple, specialty schools that are in Cornell University.
    It was a little difficult to hear some of the narration because of the music but everything else was fine. I am interested in attending Cornell for many things including its majors and campus.

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  5. This photostory did a great job of advertising Cornell. I found it very interesting sharing the history of Cornell. I would suggest lowering the music at some parts so it is easier to hear. I am interested in attending this school because of the many major that interst me.

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  6. This photostory did a thorough job of decribing Cornell. Beginning the presentation with the history of Cornell was what I found to be most interesting. I suggest lowering the music because it was difficult to hear the information. I'm not interested in Cornell because it's an ivy league school and is probably too difficult to get into.

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  8. This photostory did a great job advertising Cornell. The information on history of Cornell was interesting to me. I would recommend lowering the the music because it was difficult for me to hear the information. Cornell's academic programs interest me, but I think it would be hard to get in.

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  9. This photostory did a fine job of advertising Cornell. I found the history of the university to be interesting. My only suggestion would be turning the volume of the music down. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  10. This was a really good photostory. The volume should be turned down of the music as it made it difficult to understand. I found the population very interesting. I am interested in this college for great academics.

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  11. This was a good photostory. Maybe the music should've been a little lower on some slides. I found it interesting that there are no athletic scholarships at this school. Im not interested in this school.

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  12. I found this photo story to be very informative and a good advertisement.I found it interesting many enrolling students are in the top ten in their class. The only suggestion I'd make is to turn down some of the music because it was hard to hear the narration. I don't feel I'll be applying here though because of its location.

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  13. This presentation was great. I thought it as interesting that it had 7 different undergrad schools including agriculture. I would take the music out because it was distracting. I am not interested in this college because its hard to get into.

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  14. the photostory did a really good job of portraying the college. i thought it was interesting to find out about the academic programs. i have no suggestions for improvement. i am not interested in this college because its very hard to get into.

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  15. This photostory portrayed Cornell very well. I found it interesting that Cornell is the only ivy league school in New York. I found the music distracting at times, however, if it was lower it deffinatley would have made the presentation excellent. Although it sounds like a great school, I am not interested in it because I do not believe I meet all the academic requirements.

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  16. The photostory did a good job detailing Cornell. Hearing about the school's past was interesting. I would recommend adjusting the sound of the music. I am interested in this school for the majors it offers.

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  17. This was a very awesome photostory of Cornell. =] I loved the music because it helped to make this presentation more lovable. Only suggestion that i have was that the music was a bit too loud but overall, I thought you guys did well. I might even consider Cornell as one of my college picks. =]

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  18. Cornell sounds great, and this photostory did a great job of emphasizing that. Other than the music issue, everything was wonderful. I really would love to go to Cornell.

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  19. COrnell sounds like a relay nice school and if it wasnt in the middle of knowwhere this photostory would make me want to go their! I like that their are a number of undergraduate schols withing the university. I would not change this photostory except the music was a little distrtacting.

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  20. Cornell is a good school and the photostory made it look even better. The music helped the overall presentation. I would like to go to Cornell because of this photostory.

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  21. The photostory was great. I loved the beginning in which the girls used background information from the schools history to captivate the viewer. I suggest double checking the volume of the music before posting because at times it was difficult to hear the speakers. I am considering Cornell as a school choice, however it is disappointing they do not offer much money to students.

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  22. Cornell is depicted incredibly well during this photostory. I enjoyed hearing the schools history and may consider going there myself. - Moneta

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  23. This Photostory is alright. I enjoyed hearing about the history, since it was something different then other photostorys. What I do recommend though is to lower the music, because it makes it difficult to hear while the narrations are played. I dont think i'll attend Cornell, I'd rather be in a military academy.

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