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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

Albany University (Kelsey & Joanna) 3rd Period

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22 comments:

  1. You did a great job on this Photo Story. I found interesting the important factors for admission because they take into account various aspects of a student when the student applys. I would have expanded on the sports asspect of Albany University but all in all I think this was a great presentation. I am interested in this college mainly because it is close to home and is a SUNY school.

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  2. I think that this Photo Story advertised Albany University very well. I found it interesting that the amount of credits needed to graduate from Albany are the same amount as those needed to graduate from Mepham. I think that adding more information on campus life would have helpful. I may be interested in attending this school because it has a great science program.

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  3. This is a great advertisement for SUNY Albany. The many academic programs held at the university was something I found very interesting. Information about the campus life and other student activities would be something I would add to the Photo Story. SUNY Albany could be a possible option of mine because of its several majors.

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  4. This is a great photostory about Albany. The great science program and vast campus was interesting. I would have included more information about the great nanotechnology center. I would want to go to this school for the great science program.

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  5. I think that Kelsey and Joanna did a great job advertising Albany with this Photo Story. I liked that they specifically made comparisons to Mepham, and personalized it by telling us exactly how far it would be to travel from Bellmore, etc. If anything, it would have been nice to see a little more information about campus activities, clubs and various groups that students can join. I might be interested in Albany, but I would have to find out more information because I don't want to go where there is a lot of snowfall in the winter.

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  6. This photostory did a great job of advertising Albany. I found it very intersting that the graduation credits were the same as those for Mepham. I would suggest including more information about campus life. I may be intersted in attending Albany because of its many majors.

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  7. Albany University is advertised very well in this photostory. I found it interesting that many graduates become CEOs. I would have liked for this photostory to elaborate more on the athletic aspect of Albany. I'm interested in Albany because it is a SUNY school and is a perfect distance from home.

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  8. This photostory advertised Albany very well. The admission requirements of this school interested me. I liked the fact that the information were focused on Mepham students. I would recommand adding more information about campus life in Albany. I'm interest in SUNY Albany because it's close to home.

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  9. This was a very good presentation. I liked how you related it back to Mepham. My only suggestion would be that you include more information on campus life. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  10. I really liked this photostory about Albany. I like how everything was related back to Mepham and that you went into admissions requirements with a lot of detail. I would have liked to learn more about what the people are like at Albany and what it is like to live on their campus. I am interested in Albany because of it's distance from home.

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  11. This photo story was great. I like how they related everything back to Mepahm students. The information of campus life could have been a little more in depth, but overall good job. Im not interested in going to this school.

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  12. I thought this photostory was a good advertisement. I found it interesting that the school is diverse and worldly. It wouldn't suggest improvements because it was very informative. I'm not interested in this school because of its location.

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  13. this presentation was great. i found it interesting how mepham was included in the photostory. i have no suggestions for this photostory because it was very informative. im not interested because of location.

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  14. I thought this Photo Story did a good job of advertising Albany. I found the information on student's careers after attending Albany to be very interesting. My only suggestion for improvement would be to add more information on campus life and programs offered, like the Honors program. I am somewhat interested in Albany because of its many majors.

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  15. This photostory was great, i liked how they related the credits needed back to mepham. I found it interesting how successful students that atend this college can be. I would have liked to hear more about programs for students, but overall it was Albany was portrayed well. I might look at this school; I am not exactly sure yet because there are better schools for my major.

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  16. I think Kelsey and Joanna did a fabulous job in advertising the University of Albany. I found this presentation to be very informative especially how many students became the CEO of many large corporations. There is no need for improvement because this very well made. I might be interested in this school for its large successes but i'm not really interested in a state school.

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  17. i like how joanna and kelsy portrayed albany in this photosory because of how it relates back to mepham. i would have liked to hear i bit more about thw student life on and off campus. I would not want to go to albany because it is far upstate.

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  18. This photostory does a good job on advertising Albany. I like the advanced science program and the campus looked very nice. It would have been nice if you included a little bit about the nanotechnology center. I would go to this school because of the science program.

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  19. Very good photostory that advertised Albany very well and made me think about going there even though I never really though about Albany before.I would have liked to hear a little more about the campus life though. -Moneta

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  20. The photostory presents ALbany very nicely. I enjoyed the thoroughness of the project most and do not suggest any changes. Although I am not interested in attending the University of Albany I think the school offers many great opportunities and has a wonderful success rate, as portrayed by it's graduates positions as CEOs of many major corporations.

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  21. This project shows Albany well. I liked hearing about the academic programs and found it a bit ironic that the credits needed to graduate are that of Mepham. This Photostory is fine and doesnt need changes. I dont think I'd go to Albany though.

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  22. Albany University was well detailed in this photostory. I liked how the presentation linked the University back to Mepham.I don't believe this photostory needs any improvement. SUNY Albany maybe be am interest to me due in part to its many majors.

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