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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Stonybrook University (Liz & Nicko) 3rd Period

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23 comments:

  1. This was a very clever and fun presentation to watch. I loved the enthusiasm and the music you put with it. You made it very lively and interesting to watch. I found intersting all the activities and services they have to offer. I dont have any suggestions on how to improve this photo story because it was really enjoyable. I might be interested in this school because of the relative closeness to home.

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  2. I really enjoyed watching this presentation. Nicko's narrations were creative and engaging. I felt like I was personally getting a close look at the school rather than hearing facts read off a sheet. StonyBrook sounds like a school that has a great community and a lot to offer. I don't have suggestions for improvement because the presentation was thorough and pleasant to watch. I don't think that I am very interested in StonyBrook because I want to attend a school that is close to a city.

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  3. I think this photo story did an excellent job advertising this school and was quite entertaining. I found it interesting that there is so much to do at StonyBrook. I don't think that there is anything to improve in this photo story. I may be interested in this college because it is very close to some and has a great science program.

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  4. This was a great advertisement for Stonybrook. The campus life that takes place at the school was something that was very interesting to hear. I wouldn't make any changes to this presentation. This is a school I'm definitely interested in because of its great academic program and reasonable tuition fees.

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  6. This photostory did a great job of advertising Stonybrook. I found Nicko's narrations to be very entertaining and intersting. I found the many activities of campus life to be very interesting. I would not sugget any changes to this photostory. I may be interested in this school because of its close location

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  7. This photostory did a great job of advertising Stonybrook and was enjoyable to watch. I found the wide variety of degrees offered to be interesting. I only suggest adding the academic requirements for admission to this photostory. I'm not very interested in Stonybrook because it is so close to home.

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  8. I loved watching this photostory. The narraration made it very interesting to listen to. All the information on academics and tuition was very interesting. I can't find any suggestions to make for this photostory. I am interested in this school because of its location close to home and offered majors.

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  9. This was an excellent photostory, with interesting narration and cool music. The narration made all of the information interesting. I have no suggestions. I don't know if I'm interested in this college, because I haven't really been paying attention to colleges.

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  10. This presentation was very entertaining but also informing. I found it interesting that freshman housing is included. Also, the campus life seems like it would be a lot of fun to participate in. I would suggest adding other expenses, for example what it would cost for food and books, not just the room and board. I am interested in the college because of all the academic options

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  11. This was a very exciting photostory to watch. I found the security and guaranteed freshmen housing interesting. I make no suggestions. I would like to attend this school for great academics and location.

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  12. This photo story was very entertaining. The music was good for the topic too. Its interesting that lacrosse is a main sport in stonybrook. I wouldn't make any suggestions. I am interested in going to this school.

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  13. This school is advertised very well. The information that is interesting si that they have so many sports. I have no suggestions because its great. I am very interested bacause its so close to home.

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  14. I thought this Photo Story did a fantastic job advertising Cortland. I thought the amount of degrees offered at Stonybrook was very interesting. I don't have any suggestions for improvements- the presentation was very thorough. I am not interested in this school because of its location.

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  15. the photostory did a wonderful job advertising. the location seems to be so convenient and beautiful. all the different majors and sports were very interesting. i dont have any suggestions for this presentation. i am not interested in this school because i want to go away, if i were to stay home, i would look into it.

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  16. I really enjoyed this presentation of Stonybrook, it was enthusiastic and made it seem like a professional advertisement. I may be interested in this college because I am looking to study medicine, however it is too close to home. I thought this presentation was excellent and i don't have any suggestions. :)

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  17. This photostory did a great job advertising Stonybrook in a fun way. I found that the the number of things offered at Stonybrook interested me. I dont really have any suggestions as this presentation is good. I'm not that interested in this college as would like to go away.

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  18. I thought that this photostory was really creative and did an amazing job of advertising Stonybrook. I found a great number of things to be quite interesting such as their biomedical programs along with other such fields. This story needs no improvement because it was just that awesome! =] Although I really enjoyed this presentation, I'm not really interested into Stonybrook. =(

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  19. This photostory was great. I didn't really know that Stonybrook offered so many sports. I really would have loved to see some SAT scores for this photostory. I am considering Stonybook mainly because it is so close to home.

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  20. This photostory was done very well. Although i am not intrested in stonybrooke i still found it suprising that i liked it. It is a little to rural for me but i found the photostory very informative. The only change i would make is to add a bit more about admission requirements.

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  21. This was a good photostory. The narration was good and I liked the campus to the school. I would like to know what I need to get to get in to the school.

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  22. I really enjoyed the photostory because it was very upbeat. I liked the full description of majors, but i would suggest including more about the admissions process. I am considering Stonybrook bc it seems like a school i would enjoy attending that has very reasonable tuition costs.

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  23. The creativity behind the narration of this photostory really captivated me as a listener. I was intrigued from the beginning I plan to look deeper into attending Stonybrook. - Moneta

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