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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Friday, May 21, 2010

St. John's University (Muhammad & Adam) 2nd Period

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15 comments:

  1. I think that the school could have been advertised better. For example, I would have liked to have known what the student to faculty ratio is. I found the amount of people that receive financial aid to be very interesting. I would recommend finding out more about the school such as diversity or maybe if people commute there or not. I am not interested in this school because it is too close to home.

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  2. I think the school was advertised well. I found the amount of programs available very interesting. I would suggest speaking louder. I am interested in this school because I like its programs and location.

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  3. I think the school was advertised pretty well, and I found it interesting that there are about 15,000 students. I would suggest speaking more loudly. I am not really interested in this school because it does not have what I am looking for.

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  4. I think this school was advertised pretty well. I found it interesting that most people received financial aid. I would suggest speaking louder. I am not interested in this school because it doesnt offer my major.

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  5. This photo story did a pretty good job at advertising St. John's University. I found it interesting that the sports at St. Jonn's include fencing and ice hockey. I would recomment speaking louder in the project because the music made it difficult to hear. I am not interested in this school because I do not want to go to a college that is close to home.

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  6. This photo story did well on informing me on St. John's. I found in interesting that St. John's offers early decision because not all schools do. I recommned using softer music next time. I'm not interested in St. John's because it is too close to home.

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  7. I think the School is Advertised very well. I find it interesting that it is located in Queens, New York. I would suggest that they lower the music. No,I am not interested in this school because it is not what i am looking for.

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  8. The photostory did a good job of informing me on the school. I found it interesting that 15,000 people attend the school and that most recieve financial aid. I would suggest to speak louder because the music drowned out the voices. I might be interested in St. Johns but I am not sure if it fits me.

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  9. It had a good amount of information. I found it interesting that the university had a few different locations.I couldn't hear some parts so speaking louder could have made the video better. I am not interested in this college because it doesn't have my major.

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  10. There was a good amount of information. I found it interesing that there is more then one location. I think chosing music without lyrics would've been helpful because it can be distracting. I am not interested in St. John's because it's too close to home.

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  11. The video provided a sufficient amount of information. I found it interesting that so many people received financial aid. I would suggest lowering the music a little bit, as it was difficult to hear at some parts. I am not interested in attending St. John's since it is too close to home

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  12. The photostory was very informative. It is interesting that St. Johns offers early decision. I would suggest talking into the microphone at a constant volume. I am not interested in St. Johns because it's too close to home.

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  13. This photostory was presented well. I found it interesting how many students receive financial aid. I would recommend speaking louder at different parts. I'm not very interested in St. John's because of how close it is.

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  14. Although i enjoyed the photostory i think it would have been much better if it included more academic and campus information about St. Johns. I would suggest adding more pictures of the university itself as well. I was interested in the number of students who recieve financial aid. However, i am not interested in attending a city school.

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  15. I think this was informative but could have revealed more about campus life. Good detail. im surprised to hear that it has such a great population.

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