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Please view the follwowing commercials. After viewing each one, post a comment discussing:

1. how well you think the commercial advertised the product.

2. persuasive appeals/rhetorical strategies/devices/elements utilized in the commercial.

3. suggestions for improvement.

4. a positive comment about the commercial.

Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Boston College (Val & Kristen) 2nd Period

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16 comments:

  1. This photo story advertised the school very well but left out some information that I would have liked to know. I found it interesting that the acceptance rate is 30%. I would recommend adding music to the photo story. I am not interested in this school because it does not have the majors that I am interested in.

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  2. The school was advertised very well. I was interested to hear that the school offers rowing and sailing. I would recommend adding some quiet music to the pictures. I am not interested in this school because it does not have my major.

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  3. This photo story advertised the school very well. I found it interesting that the school is only 6 miles away from downtown Boston. I would suggest adding music to avoid the awkward pauses of silence between pictures. I am not interested in this school because it is out of state.

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  4. This photo story provided a lot of information about Boston College. I found it interesting that 30% of students that apply are accepted. I would recommend adding music to the photo story. I am interested in this school because it offers my major.

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  5. This project did a good job at advertising the school, especially all the sports Boston College offers. I found it interesting that it is located in a suburban setting and has a marching band. The only recommendation i have is to add music and maybe use different transitions for the slides. I am interested in this school because I like Boston, but I am more interested in SUNY schools.

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  6. This project was very informative on this college. I found it interesting that 80% of the students live on campus. The only recommendation i have is to add some music to the video. I'm not really interested in this school because i have my mind set on other colleges.

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  7. This video was very informative. I was surprised at how many sports Boston College had because I always thought it was very small. I recommend adding some music to the background. I don't want to go to BC because they don't have the major that I am interested in.

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  8. The photostory gave me very much information.
    It is interesting that 30% of applicants are admitted. I think they should have added music in order to drown out background noises. No, becasue It is too far away from home.

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  9. This video provided a substantial amount of useful information. A factoid that I found intriguing was that it is a four-year school. One suggestion for improvement is to cut the break time in between each section because at times, there are pauses that can be easily eliminated. This unviersity isn't exactly what I'm aiming for in a college.

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  10. The photostory provided good information. I found it interesting that 30% of applicants are admitted. I would have suggested adding music. I do not have an interest in this college because it doesn't offer my major

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  11. This photostory provided a good amount of information. I found it interesting that the university is very close to Boston. I would consider adding music. I am not interested in this university because it doesn't seem like a good place for me.

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  12. This photostory advertised BC pretty well. I find it interesting that it has a higher admission rate than I thought. I would suggest adding music to the presentation. I'm not interested in BC because the academic focus is not in an area that I wish to study.

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  13. This potostory had a lot of inoformation. I would recomend speaking louder durin ght epresentaion. I found it interesting that there were a lot of programs. This college doesn't seem like the right fit ofr me.

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  14. This photostory was highly informative. A fact I found interesting was how close BC was from downtown Boston. I would recommend adding music to compliment the presentation. I am very interested in BC for it's location, student population, and academic fields offered.

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  15. Although i am not intersted in the college because of its location, the photostory was very informative. I was interested in the fact that it offered many subjects in the social sciences field. The only recommendation i have is to add some more information about what there is to do around campus.

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  16. The advertising was done very well. However, i was slightly surprised to find that the acceptance rate was at 30 percent. Music should be added to the photo-story. This college doesn't interest me because of its lack of majors that I have an interest in.

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