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Wednesday, May 26, 2010

SUNY-Buffalo (Pat & Corey) 2nd Period

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16 comments:

  1. This project provided a lot of information about Buffalo. I found it interesting that the most popular majors are business, engineering and psychology. I would suggest adding/raising the music in the second half of the project. I may want to go here but I think it is too far away for me.

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  2. This project thoroughly informed me about SUNY Buffalo. I found it interesting that the average class size is only 20-26 people. I would suggest speaking louder at some parts of the photo story. I am very interested in attending SUNY Buffalo because it is a good college in a great location.

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  3. This photo story was extremely informative. I found the different majors to be very interesting and that one of the most popular majors is engineering. The only thing that I would suggest is lowering the music at some points in the beginning of the project. I was not interested in this college but I may now be interested because they have a major that I may possibly be interested in although it is a little bigger then I had wanted.

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  4. This photo story provided a good amount of information about SUNY Buffalo and advertised the school very well. One thing i found interesting is that one of the more popular majors is psychology. The only thing i would suggest is to add music to the second half of the project and raise the volume of the voices in some parts. I am somewhat interested in this school because it offers so many different things, but a disadvantage is that it's pretty far away and cold.

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  5. This video provided a descent amount of information about SUNY Buffalo. One thing i found interesting is that rowing is a division one sport, and that psychology is a big major. In some parts of the video, the volume of the voices should be a little louder, and add music for the second portion of the video. I'm not really interested in this school b/c it's far away.

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  6. I found this video to give a good amount of detail on student life. I found it interesting how there is a 16:1 student to teacher ratio because I mostly have been looking at bigger schools. I advise adding music to the second half of the video and maybe lowering the music a little in the beginning. I'm not intersted in Buffalo because it's too cold for me.

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  7. This photostory provided me with a lot of information. I was interesting in the fact that the student to faculty ratio is 16:1. I would have recommended lowering the music. No, It is too far away.

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  8. This video provided a sufficient amount of inofrmation about the university. A factoid that I found intriguing was that the mascots each have their own name. One suggestion for improvement is to speal louder or hold the mic closer while talking because the audio gets low at some points. Although the university does sound appealing, it's too far from home.

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  9. This photostory provided me with a lot of information about the school. I found it interesting that the ratio was 16:1. I would recommend lowering the music. I am not interested in this school because it is too far away.

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  10. I thought that the video was very detailed, and adding in the most popular majors was an interesting point. Speaking louder or lowering the music would have made the video better. I am not interested in this college because i am looking for somewhere closer to home.

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  11. The photostory provided me with a great amount of information about SUNY Buffalo. I found it interesting that psychology was a popular major. A suggestion, is that the speaking could have been a little bit louder or lower the volume of the music. I am not interested in the school since it is very far away

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  12. This photostory provided a lot of information about the university. I found it interesting that a lot of students design their own major or double major. I would add music to the end of the photo story and no I'm not very interested in this university because it does not include the major I'm looking for.

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  13. I learned lots of stuff about the university of buffalo. It is interesting that there are always people playing frisbee in the courtyard.The music could have been lowered at some points. I am not interested in UB because I would prefer a school with a lower population.

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  14. I think this photostory did a really great job of providing information about the University. I feel that the music made it difficult to hear the descriptions especially towards the beginning. However, i was interested to hear that the University has a psychology program, and would consider the school since it is in-state and affordable.

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  15. This photostory was very informative and detailed. There was alot of useful information. I am surprised that there are so many divsion 1 sports teams and that the acceptance rate was 48%. I am not looking at UB as a top choice because it dosnt have the major i want.

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  16. The advertising of the school was done quite spectacularly. Interestingly, I foudn the fact that over 50 percent recieved financial aid was peculiar.
    I suggest lowering the background song volume. No, I am not, because i am not interested in pursuing a degree at a SUNY university.

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